Each segment is identified by the sequence number and the name of a tune that plays some significance in the segment.
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Zach Rivers’ piano playing embraced a menu of music from everywhere he had been. Although he chose Billy Strayhorn’s “Take The A Train” as his final piece tonight, Rivers was determined to take his audience not straight to Harlem, but on a fifteen minute sonic excursion through the many ethnic neighborhoods along the way. With the direction “we’re taking them to Harlem, the long way” given to his bass player and drummer, he introduced the piece with a grumble of subterranean minor tone clusters picking up speed as Omar Foucault laid down a fat round bass grumble, joined by Tyrus Dupree’s steady chachugga chachugga with his brushes, emulating the sounds of iron wheels clinking on the seams where the rails joined. This tune has always been played as a train song for Riverrun. After a couple of minutes click clack and thrumming, Rivers pulled a switch and shifted into the celebrated run that announces the song, changing the atmosphere in the club to a more familiar line. The band played the bridge jazz-straight before Rivers took his first solo – transporting his audiences with a salsa beat through little Puerto Rico, Juju harmonies through the West African neighborhood, a wisp of Klezmer melody to honor the Jewish residents long gone, and finally ending with the elegantly phrased chords of the Duke, opening the door for Omar Foucault to engineer the train through his own rich historical tendencies.
Toward
the end of his bass solo Dupree joined him, accelerating the pace to where
Foucault had exit at the next station. He said his goodbyes and left the
drummer to travel alone. Dupree tended to take his solos in chunks of 32
measures. His limbs were not connected to anything other than his gut, and he
laid out polyrhythms from all the places he’d been: tribal West Africa, Bali,
Motown, New Orleans, the rice patties of Viet Nam, the bath houses of Hell’s
Kitchen, and Rikers Island. Rivers loved playing with him because his sense of
rhythm came from the rawness of the street, the jungle, and doing time, yet
they were never brash or crude. Dupree made statements from places unfamiliar
to citizens, but they carried weight, never burdened or preached, and always
supported the music.
The
crowd was typical for Riverrun’s regular Thursday night gig. The band had its
followers, mostly students from the local university, a handful of jazz fans
who expected splendid music who were never disappointed. Then there was
Foucault’s student entourage, tourists looking for something different from
home. Like Kingston Mines in Chicago, Ryles in Cambridge, and Tipitina’s in New
Orleans, Tibor’s’s could be found in every tourist guide, and had a
well-deserved reputation for presenting the best local talent across genres in
the area. Tibor Meszaros owned the joint ever since he emigrated from Hungry
where he was a Freedom Fighter during the revolution in ’56. A miserable
son-of-a-bitch who owned a dozen or so slum apartment buildings in the city, he
had a wart on his cheek that resembled a dead spider, wore outdated pin stripe
suits he bought at the local Salvation Army, had an awful comb over that looked
like a squid laid down and died. Yet he took pride in his club, and had an
uncanny sense in finding musicians who had something new to offer. Rivers got a
solo gig after he fixed some problem for Meszaros, and expanded to a trio in
order to explore new musical terrain and to increase his musical possibilities.
As
if there were some powerful sonic magnet, the trio pulled to play the head, fairly
inside, one more time. They stopped on a dime, bowed, and Rivers mumbled “Omar
Foucault on bass, Tyrus Dupree on drums. Thank you for coming,” and left the
stage. After receiving the envelope from Rivers with his share of the door,
Foucault headed for the bar where his buddies from college were waiting for him
with a pitcher of beer. Dupree broke down his drum kit. Rivers handed him his
envelope and two fingers of Wild
Turkey neat. “Good gig. Thanks. See you next Thursday.”
By
2:30 the fog outside had turned into a drizzle, which distorted the lights from
the other businesses along the waterfront. This was a favorite time for Rivers,
who measured his life by chunks of favorite times, a strategy that served him
well when he worked for the CIA, and for now, as he lived alone in a world of
his choosing. The combination of fatigue and satisfaction heightened his
senses, and as he walked the half mile in the moist salty night he thought of
how his unencumbered life, simple, with a great deal of time, without
obligations or responsibilities, was a good life. His old life as an agent got
too complicated. Too many situations were beyond his control; too many
jackasses giving orders; too many dirt bags having their asses saved; too much
duplicity, treachery, cruelty. His adult life had been as chaotic as his
childhood when he was living with parents who were drunks. Now things were
good. He had no close friends, but that was his choice. Lost trust in others,
and he was good with that. Yet he continued to help people in jams. It added
interest to his quiet life, and those favors were reciprocal, and he collected
many unspoken markers for later use. There were no special woman in his life
and he was good with that. Being a piano player he had no trouble finding a willing
companion for a night or a weekend when the desire arose. Longer than that and
they began to ask questions that he didn’t want to answer. Being his age the
desire arouse as often as a full moon, and he was good with that too.
As he walked to
the entrance to his condo on the marina, he breathed in the cool sea air and
thought, “as long as I continue to keep a low profile and stay uninvolved, I
could live the rest of my life like this.”
From
the beam of the streetlight he saw what looked like a pile of rags bunched
against his door. Moving closer he realized that it was a body. The long blond
hair was matted and disheveled, a dark raincoat over a white dress that was
drenched with blood. He bent down on one knee, placing his right ear near her
nose. He heard a faint girlish moan. She was breathing. She was still alive. He
got up and scanned the perimeter of his complex, seeing nothing suspicious. He
looked down at the crumpled figure at his feet, and whispered, “fuck.”
splendid prose Davey, capturing all the mysteries, magic and pain being a jazz musician. This has the makings of a novel with all the foreshadowing of related themes, however I feel that there needs to be a smoother transition to the last paragraph, which takes the reader from Rivers' contemplating his solitary life, into a foggy SF night (my interpretation) to a crime scene... keep working on it!
ReplyDeleteThanks bro. Appreciate your comments.
ReplyDeleteSince I started writing this thing a month ago I've been listening almost exclusively to jazz - especially Trane and Miles, and my passionate appreciation for the magic and mastery has reached the level of when I first listened to jazz back in those days.
Listening closer, especially to Coltrane, has been a breathtaking experience.
My teacher suggested that I set the story in an actual location, and I was thinking about somewhere on the East Coast, but San Francisco would work.
We'll see.
There is more to come. Stay tuned!
Keep those installments coming! Compelling story.
ReplyDeleteWell, I know I'm biased but I think this is beautiful writing and a compelling story; I can't wait to see how it develops.
ReplyDeleteHey Dave,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you develop the characters. You might shorten some of the paragraphs so the reader can better separate ideas.
Keep writing as the Muse inspires!